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    Legend of the Streets

    (Hook x2)
    A written confession gained life From the Mind
    Life scorched on paper a caged life of Some Kind
    Scripts of the great legends Improve your Brain
    Taking drugs for the false motion to Remove your Pain
    Legend of the streets, only the rich Disapprove your Reign

    The time comes when decisions Must be Made
    Murders occur for blood, continue ‘till the Lust is paid
    Time turn rough and thoughts Turn Suicidal
    Never learnt to read, eyes Burn through the Bible
    On the streets your known for Jumping and Stealing
    Start to feel emotions but the devil must be Stumping the Feelings
    Never had love, never had a place to call home
    Sleepless nights no memories so Erase the Crawl of Chrome
    Knew life would be hard but didn’t picture it Like This
    Handicapped to taught men they got a mind you got a fist to Fight With
    Starving for food , pride stops you from getting Food Stamps
    Looking for a place to go but shelters only Include Champs
    So you start plotting a movement to a Better Life
    So you dream of your hands and a Wetter Knife

    (Hook x2)
    A written confession gained life From the Mind
    Life scorched on paper a caged life of Some Kind
    Scripts of the great legends Improve your Brain
    Taking drugs for the false motion to Remove your Pain
    Legend of the streets, only the rich Disapprove your Reign



    Please leave some feed. Much appreciated

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    Quite a good piece, is this your first OM?

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    You should make a decent topical battler bro

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    not bad for your first OM.....rhymes were good but the vocab wasnt relaly that upped but still..i'm impressed...topic was kind of cool.....flow was aiight...same with the strucutre.....keep elevating and keep at it..peace

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    i liked your rhymin style, it makes for a great flow. You need to use more complex terminology, but still pretty good though, overall well done homie.

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