SIX (6) LINES MINIMUM!!!
Please follow that rule, aight?
Now...start spittin!
Start with me if ya able!
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SIX (6) LINES MINIMUM!!!
Please follow that rule, aight?
Now...start spittin!
Start with me if ya able!
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dude say he born to kill
naw, you was born to squeal
right now, i'm goin separate the wack emcees from the ill
starting with you, you should try your best to kick a skill
so its no way now, get down or lay down
or my killer flows will amputate your legs which will be a "physical breakdown"
I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
It took you five lines before you said a single thing "Hard"/
Second line I spit heat leave your whole approach scorched and charred/
Trying to spit a quit six because you Suck Nuts In Compliance/
Snuggle up to the moderator so they don't think your ass was defiant/
My verse is a science, mixing potions in beakers to sew up your lips/
Because I've never read anything bleaker than the words of this kid/
I've got a nerve for this kid/
I think its great that young kids rap, in fact I encourage it/
I also encourage you to spit unless you just give up and quit.
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Get cut loose kid, get flipped, Im'a make ya slip (Skid)...
Foot loose, relieve traction, fallin on ya ass...
Kinda like ya verse......... Did...
Compliance is a science, that... You may need to learn...
Skills Hot, My Confessions, I think I... May need to let it burn...
My style Fly on the Nasdaq, Hah... Im'a raise my stock...
Flow won't sew ya lips up, but... It will give ya writers block...
Thump' represents his own syndicate...
Poetry to "Poetri"?... Dedicate this time...
.....................To murdering illiterates...
Hmm... Teachin these Cats to much dismay...
Hope ya'll learn ya lessons, i pray...
You just started my quota today...
I gots people to merc dude
Last edited by Thump'; February 21st, 2007 at 10:34 AM
"9 to 5 is how you survive//
Im not tryna survive...
I'm tryna live it to the limit and love it alive//"
Only one bar ta kill ya cuz ya shit "B" booty...
cuz wit a name like "thump"... er' wait...
aren't you a character from a disney movie???
"Revered intention miscomunicated through vulgarity
endangers the minds emaculate invention" RAYGE
Shit "B" Booty?...
Big Ol' Booty Bars...
It's those same Ol' Booty Bars...
That leave "Rayge" with many scars...
Hah, Yeah...
So I'm "Thumper"...
And your that nigga on that sticker that i see on back bumpers...
Unlike you dog... I'm legit...
People layin out Toilet Paper for me, 'cuz i'm the Shit...
Your comin' at me?... On some weak shit, please...
Beat me?, When i...
Tap my keys... Sounds like, symphonies...
Now...
Gargle these, while your on your knees...
Ya lines is shit, ya prides forfeigt...
No point to debate it...
I warned ya about the writers block...
Shits a bitch, ain't it...
(U spelt "depth" wrong by the way)
Last edited by Thump'; February 21st, 2007 at 01:40 PM
"9 to 5 is how you survive//
Im not tryna survive...
I'm tryna live it to the limit and love it alive//"
That sucked, an the stucture was wack,
I knock u out tha stadium, cuz I'll hit ya wid a corked bat,
make u got splat, like a bug on my windshield,
knockin u way out in tha stands, past center field,
I'm playin center here to rob u of ur glory,
U aint no good and ur fuckin punch lines are boring,
Fuckin wit me is da last thang u want,
U like baseball so u can slap otha dudes butts,
so what If the otha dude was wack,
U should be able to come up wit betta shit than that,
That was horrible, fuckin Garbage,
U rap like a special ED kid, u Fuckin sound retarded,
U serious thinkin that would work?,
Step up to the plate so ur punk ass can get murked!
Last edited by BigDrew; February 21st, 2007 at 06:03 PM
nigga talkin about robbin dude of his glory
but my shit stay ill in the clutch..call it rob horry
my rhymes r too crazy..put em in the asylum
i kill off ya fam n put they bodies where u cant find em
u think u can murk someone..i dont really believe you
seran rap ya flow cuz that shit is just see thru
Big Drew, u nothin but a big dissapointment,
Ur a gay superhero in disguise, like Clark Kent,
u think ya clever, but my shits way better,
IF u won a lifetime supply of cheez wiz, u still wouldn't get no chedder,
I"m gettin u madder, got u turnin redder than 99 baloons,
my raps get stuck in ya head, like theme song from Looney Tunes,
Last edited by Matix; February 21st, 2007 at 08:25 PM
son you aint go skill. you so lame ima kill you with my mother fuckin drill. you sad and weak. to me you cant even compete. cuz if i see you in my hood ill garenty youll die im my streets!!
Who's this kid trying ta fool comin up into this forum...
Ya, he's a killer and his weapon of choice is boardem...
37 posts and i still see no flowing words...
O, i get it, your fighting back for the return of the nerds...
Glory... EvEn has just fucked up what you thought was good...
It happens... being that your from the YA YA SISTERhood...
Your playing games this aint no barbie play house...
Chewing you up like a stray cat does a mouse...
GGGG.... pheewwwww.....
get sum skills bitch, cuz right now, yur shits wack,
yur rap was more "pointless", than a "pinback",
I'll roll u over, wid a boulder,
battle u in tha "Artic", an give u tha "cold" shoulder,
El Soldiur, in English, means, wack,
it ain't raining outside, an u still a wet back,
Last edited by Matix; February 21st, 2007 at 08:47 PM
Matix...
The only thing thats wack is what you claim to be...
Your spitting words out like El Soldier the newbie...
Are you and him in on games, this faggit shit must stop...
Drills and wet backs, your so horny i think your gonna pop...
Taking on the flyweight, post 1..9...9...
It must be an error cause i see no fucking rhyme...
I've read your shit you must be trying hard...
Hey it takes corouge to rap when your a retard...
First your moking him on his english well thats really sweel...
Coming from NEO the ONE who cant spell...
So remember its even, the arctic grows colder...
That chill down your spine ... well ... thats my cold shoulder
wut u think thats hot this forum u mistreatin
cuz he couldnt EvEn win if it was him he beatin
so old man just stop speakin
before these vets start critiquin
and tha Mod's tired and ya lame profiles deleted
Me V.S. Octane
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