Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@FaQEyeReddit
@Slayerr.
Last edited by miracle; May 24th, 2024 at 10:40 PM
@FaQEyeReddit @Slayerr.
No way fitz was showing so I pulled him out and added FaQEyeReddit
FAQ this is a 1 bar battle… which equals 2 lines here so keep it at that.. if you need any reference look at some battles from last week
Both u guys check in
Ohh sweeeeeeet ok check check I didn't even read how long we have but I'm sooooo down let's goooo
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
Word
The smoke 💨 it gets in my eyes. 🥹
(Does jutsu hand sign, the ground beings to shake)
No santa!! But with this GIF’file REC-or-Destroy his image in rare format the same time!
Steps ahead, my bars spin slayer; no REYALS (rails) if he don’t train; he D-REYALS off this train line..
Only part I’ll explain this time is reyals is slayer spun backwards. And “recordestroy” wreck or destroy. Thank you all and to slayerr good luck brother ✌️
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
Say Bloody Mary in the mirror 3 times and your death will appear sealing your time
Last time I said faqeye it was followed by “what a waste of my time reading his line”
i'm going to have to go with Slayerr... FaQ, try to narrow your wordplay down a little ... simplify it for the readers sake...
slayerr, try to format your puns a little better.. i see what you tried to do, so this time i'll give you the benefit of doubt
v-slayerr
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
FaQ sound like freestyle through the whole verse
Slayer-more of a Punchline
vote-Slayer
Fahq - good idea just needed to be a little more put together. Definitely some "layers" to the bar as you would say... the colors and changes in text can easily throw of the reader when it comes to glow. It was a little drawn out but sometimes simpler is better. Decent attempt just needed to more connected with the flow and rhyme scheme.
Slay - decent bar, nothing to crazy or amazing about it but enough to win on account it was straight to the point and connected
V- slay
Slay wins 3-0 ko
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