FaQEyeReddit Vs Miracle (OPEN FOR VOTES)

[miracle]

10 lines
Due whenever

[FaQEyeReddit]

Sweet I’m checked in and take as long as needed bro I’ll try to make sure I drop either before or soon after you unless it’s right away then I’ll try to speed up but I may need a day or so

[FaQEyeReddit]

I’m going to post today actually in a few

[FaQEyeReddit]

(A soft wind blows the lights flicker on and off until, three entities stand side by side -FAQ, EYE, REDDIT-)

The general consensus in the room is, Eye-mean, mira-cool…
The battles accepted, now your screwed kid, I’m in miracle 🤪…
No protection I’ll shatter wombs an, “Hymen miracle”

Eye’ll explain that, cuz eye knows hes Verging…
on his death bed with Eye flows emerging..
Eye’s close whatever divine soul he goes in…
sick-as-hell no type-O when eye flow, nerds burning..
Block his win-doe then x:\sources’em, in third person..
get it? a triple entendre sex, exorcism and hacking..
holy trinity, Omnipotent, Omnipresent but omnivore lacking…
IM the internet protocol that’ll track him and address him..
Equip with Zip-ties that strap him to the dresser,
Reboot his head till files get stacked up in compression..
I’ll son miracle with immaculate conception..
I’m tryna help him see truth before I damage him..
Like when neo put his hand in mira and started panicking..
News flash Mr Anderson ain’t the only “one” that’ll handle him..
I’ll get miracle whipped like I’m tryna get freaky for dinner..
On the mic’ I jack son, only time we seen the man in the mira.


Just for little clarity:
“eye knows he’s virgin” & “eye nose he’s verging,”- eyes verge from the nose making you cross eyed seeing double.
a play on my scheme where you see three of me in the battle. Homophoned Sickle cell & sick-as-hell, no type-o meaning no mistake or blood type, my sources decoder is (My sores dic odor trying to paint a picture that I’m infecting a std or virus on him) x:\sources’em is a homophone for exorcism and a code function in windows. Protocol is pro to call. Everything else I leave up to the readers. Making sure at least it doesn’t look like I just wrote anything. Thanks for the battle nd I look forward to reading yours. Cheers

[miracle]

FaQEyeReddit aka frenchflacco

U wanna battle someone good here? I bring the heat until he dies
When it comes to Arby’s best, my fat ass will make sure french fries
Imma gangster my dude.. it’s my whole swag thats getting me far
If people wanna no how u roll, I’ll shove you out of a moving fucking car
I’ll rifle thru ya home like I’m looking for something. Ya getting murdered b,
Ya whole family left crying when they see lasers light up Eye like lasik surgery
Go ahead n act like u ain’t mad, boy you lying like a rug
Ur obviously bent outta shape, when I snap ya bones to fit u in the hole I dug
For that cash I’ll kill ya… bullets run up ya spine like shivers
I’ll catch you at the bank then leave ya body washed up on one by the side of a river

[mal diction]

@FaQEyeReddit ...it's ten lines bro

edit your verse so people can vote

[FaQEyeReddit]

On second thought I voluntarily DQ. It’s my fault since I joined up I’ve not read the rules on many things. I realize that it’s important to do. It wouldn’t make much sense I edit to fit 10 lines at this point as well as after a time frame I don’t think the option is there anymore. Miracle your verse was clear concise and to the point. So honestly you deserve the win. Cheers brother <3

[Lady Poet]

FaQ bars isn't bad it's ok for audio

Mir more of a textcee head I felt like his bars of a diss
Rhyme well

vote-Mir

[Clout]

(A soft wind blows the lights flicker on and off until, three entities stand side by side -FAQ, EYE, REDDIT-)

The general consensus in the room is, Eye-mean, mira-cool…
The battles accepted, now your screwed kid, I’m in miracle 🤪…
No protection I’ll shatter wombs an, “Hymen miracle”

nah man this doesn't work for me, i get the play on words and gearing towards double meaning/entendre but this is worded too soft of a touch.

Eye’ll explain that, cuz eye knows hes Verging…
on his death bed with Eye flows emerging..
Eye’s close whatever divine soul he goes in…
sick-as-hell no type-O when eye flow, nerds burning..

eh

Block his win-doe then x:\sources’em, in third person..
get it? a triple entendre sex, exorcism and hacking..
holy trinity, Omnipotent, Omnipresent but omnivore lacking…
IM the internet protocol that’ll track him and address him..
Equip with Zip-ties that strap him to the dresser,
Reboot his head till files get stacked up in compression..
I’ll son miracle with immaculate conception..
I’m tryna help him see truth before I damage him..
Like when neo put his hand in mira and started panicking..
News flash Mr Anderson ain’t the only “one” that’ll handle him..
I’ll get miracle whipped like I’m tryna get freaky for dinner..
On the mic’ I jack son, only time we seen the man in the mira.

So reading through this its clear you know how to structure bars to flow and rhyme well. You just need to make them coherently rip apart your opponent. This seems like you are a song writer, respect but this is battling you gotta practice a bit more.

FaQEyeReddit aka frenchflacco

U wanna battle someone good here? I bring the heat until he dies
When it comes to Arby’s best, my fat ass will make sure french fries
jab at best
Imma gangster my dude.. it’s my whole swag thats getting me far
If people wanna no how u roll, I’ll shove you out of a moving fucking car
eh
I’ll rifle thru ya home like I’m looking for something. Ya getting murdered b,
Ya whole family left crying when they see lasers light up Eye like lasik surgery
solid
Go ahead n act like u ain’t mad, boy you lying like a rug
Ur obviously bent outta shape, when I snap ya bones to fit u in the hole I dug
Light jab
For that cash I’ll kill ya… bullets run up ya spine like shivers
I’ll catch you at the bank then leave ya body washed up on one by the side of a river

Nothing crazy but it all hits good, direct, concise, slick wording apply some wit but not overkill where you sacrifice the sting of the attack.

V/ miracle

[FaQEyeReddit]

Thank you this is the advice I been looking for you and a couple others have helped this is me upping sweeet let’s gooooo

[Slayerr.]

Eye has some sleeping potential just needs to read some legendary battles or something to see how text battling differs from audio and adapt his style a bit. With his creativity he’s got potential. Miracle had some dope flips and a lot of consistency every bar was dope tbf. Mir takes this
V/mir